psa+rough+draft

June 2, 2009 here is the first rough draft of the movie. I need to extend some of the clips for sound media type="file" key="laura's psa.m4v"

June 3, 2009 this is the second rough draft, it is much better than the first. 1. Look at the transitions and decide which you prefer or if they are fine as they are. 2. we need to decide if we want to write anything on the black pages are use different transitions. I think write something but not sure what. media type="file" key="comic book psa rough draft 2.m4v"

June 3, 2009 draft #3 media type="file" key="comic book psa draft 3.m4v"

June 4, 2009 draft #4 media type="file" key="comic book psa draft 4.m4v"

June 5, 2009 draft #5 - with audio by Amy

I need to change the volume on Amy because I cannot get the audio higher on Garrett. It sounded much better last night - I must have been tired. I think the black screen before my son watching tv is too long, I will shorten that too. The time is now 57 seconds. Woo Hoo! media type="file" key="comic book psa draft 5.m4v"